This is a wonderful little story. The words paint a very clear picture. It also shows how guys really think. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories in this line.
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Anonymous11/22/08
Wonderful, gentle and erotic story.
Excellent premise, gentle development and imaginative start. Is there more? I suspect there is, and I for one, look forward to how the relationship might evolve. I will watch for another installment.
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Anonymous11/16/11
Finish it.
There is so much more to add with a chapter II. That would earn a 5.
English
Hot and believable!
This is a wonderful little story. The words paint a very clear picture. It also shows how guys really think. I'm looking forward to seeing more stories in this line.
Wonderful, gentle and erotic story.
Excellent premise, gentle development and imaginative start. Is there more? I suspect there is, and I for one, look forward to how the relationship might evolve. I will watch for another installment.
Finish it.
There is so much more to add with a chapter II. That would earn a 5.
Nice Touch
Of course he could always claim a nocturnal emission - which it was, in a way!
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