All Comments on 'Levels of Control Ch. 04'

I really felt like that could have been a great, teasing story. Or, at the very least, there could have been some twist or thought to it, like did Meagan actually do that to buy herself time, get rid of this temptation? It really just ended like you got tired of writing.

Its pure hard sexuality from beginning to end earned the 100, but what bothers me is how a female author could think of a story-line so dark and slimy as this!

I think the middle was missing! Good writing style though, just needs to be longer with more description pleaseee

I want my sixty seconds back.