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danalearnsdanalearnsover 15 years ago
intrigued

i cannot wait to read more of this story. you have me very intrigued. thank you for sharing and please write more when you are able.

Ton8tyTon8tyabout 15 years ago
Delightfully constructed mystery

This is an excellent beginning. Very intriguing and imaginative. Not the usual Lit fare. Please keep it going - I believe that I've figured out the identity of The Robe and I'd like to confirm my suspicion.

RME

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More please

Who is the robe? I hope it is Paul.

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