i cannot wait to read more of this story. you have me very intrigued. thank you for sharing and please write more when you are able.
This is an excellent beginning. Very intriguing and imaginative. Not the usual Lit fare. Please keep it going - I believe that I've figured out the identity of The Robe and I'd like to confirm my suspicion. RME
Who is the robe? I hope it is Paul.
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intrigued
i cannot wait to read more of this story. you have me very intrigued. thank you for sharing and please write more when you are able.
Delightfully constructed mystery
This is an excellent beginning. Very intriguing and imaginative. Not the usual Lit fare. Please keep it going - I believe that I've figured out the identity of The Robe and I'd like to confirm my suspicion.
RME
More please
Who is the robe? I hope it is Paul.
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