nice contrast between characters ... highly erotic
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Anonymous03/30/09
stupid
totally stupid story why would he continue to hang around karen after she made it clear there was no way they could ever be together and since he had no interest in jessie at the time he would have no reason to hang around also it was totally unrealistic how fast he suddenly decided he wanted jessie what a waste of time belongs in the fantacy area not here
Its been some time since I wrote this first chapter of SIS. Now going into the third chapter, I find this is the only one of my stories that I enjoy re-reading. I get caught up in the characters and love the hell out of them, including George. The sequel is even better while not as fast-paced in the eros, the story of George and Jessie progresses in an enthralling way. I hope to publish a third and final chapter.
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Well done
nice contrast between characters ... highly erotic
stupid
totally stupid story why would he continue to hang around karen after she made it clear there was no way they could ever be together and since he had no interest in jessie at the time he would have no reason to hang around also it was totally unrealistic how fast he suddenly decided he wanted jessie what a waste of time belongs in the fantacy area not here
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Its been some time since I wrote this first chapter of SIS. Now going into the third chapter, I find this is the only one of my stories that I enjoy re-reading. I get caught up in the characters and love the hell out of them, including George. The sequel is even better while not as fast-paced in the eros, the story of George and Jessie progresses in an enthralling way. I hope to publish a third and final chapter.
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