I loved the story! I found myself reading quickly so that I wouldn't have to wait an extra second to see what level of erotic pleasure he would take her to next. The build up kept me on the edge of my seat. Another 5 for You! Wiggling with pleasure.
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10/22/09
Mmmmm
Delicious and well-written! The perfect combination.
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Anonymous05/16/11
You really have to READ what you wrote. SpellCheck doesn't address words which exist, but which are not the correct word for the context. For example: "thanks" should be ""thank" Otherwise, very good writing. Very explicit, and sentual
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What an Exquisite tease You are!
I loved the story! I found myself reading quickly so that I wouldn't have to wait an extra second to see what level of erotic pleasure he would take her to next. The build up kept me on the edge of my seat. Another 5 for You! Wiggling with pleasure.
Mmmmm
Delicious and well-written! The perfect combination.
You really have to READ what you wrote. SpellCheck doesn't address words which exist, but which are not the correct word for the context. For example: "thanks" should be ""thank" Otherwise, very good writing. Very explicit, and sentual
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