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by Anonymous12/11/08

You Need an Editor

I liked some of your story. However, you need an editor to polish it up. Who's Mark? WTF is trust passing? Lots of mistakes like that.

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by Anonymous12/11/08

You got a 2...

...because you couldn't spell the letter "A" even if it was right in front of you. Trust passing? Give me a break. The term is is "...trespassing..." & you still probably wouldn't get it right. Get an Editor who's a mind reader. That might help though I doubt it.

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