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miss_trustmiss_trustover 15 years ago
enjoyed

i enjoyed this poem as i have several of your others. My one reservation: amidst all these fantastic images and references, things like 'ur' and a lack of apostrophes to denote possessive in 'others' and 'hes' bother me... Regardless, you write well & i hope to read more.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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I realize that by using "ur" you're keeping the poem casual, but you do have a hyphenated word. So I'd go ahead and also use "he's" or go with "he is." Other than that... interesting poem.

SadeanSadeanover 15 years ago
You were right

I loved it. So many things going on here that I can barely get my head round it all! I mean that in a good way, of course. I like action. :)

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