by Whitesocks
I liked the twist of it. This one had me laughing and excited at the same time.
ya need to write a sequal, friend...you just gotta write one!!!
I so rarely enjoy a story enough to be bothered to leave a comment. This was as enjoyable as anything I've read for a long time.
Please write a sequel.
(Tried to add a comment, not sure if it got submitted...sorry if this is a duplicate)
Great work! Entertaining, good premise and sense of humor! The flow, the characters and the interaction was believable and kept my attention throughout.
I really think Literotica was created to showcase articles like this one....you did a great job of entertaining without dipping unnecessarily into vulgarity....the descriptions of the three people was excellent, without defaulting into single-syllable words. The ending raised more questions (hence others asking for a sequel....hahah) but I think leaving it where you did makes it stand out all the more.
I noticed you took a bit of a hiatus for a few years (this was the first story of yours I've read), so welcome back!!!! Keep 'em coming (so to speak....hahahah) I'll now read the others you've taken the time to write....hope they are as entertaining as this story!
Really enjoyed this one. I've yet to have such an experience, what an exciting thought! A mother and her daughter at the same time, how refreshing!