All Comments on 'Cats and Dogs Ch. 01'

by ingarlm

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sacrificedangelsacrificedangelover 15 years ago
Its...

...a very good start!! I enjoyed it so far, and looking forward to the following chapters. Only one little comment, mainly about the first few paragraphs; it is like you are listing the decriptions whereas you could take a little more time to describe them instead. It doesnt quite fit with the rest of the story (hmm, hard to explain) The flow of the rest of it is fabulous, it was only that first bit. Anyway, very good!

WatercrazyWatercrazyover 15 years ago
interesting story

I admit i read fast the first descriptive part and savoured the rest. I cant wait to read more of it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic Piece

I love this new story. You have started with a bang, cant wait to read ALL of it. Keep writing i love ur stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I love all your stories so doing a grand rereading.

Kazehana552Kazehana552about 13 years ago

I am in love with this series. It's wonderfully written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
tight grip

I usually skim read most stories, and get straight to the kinky contents. But, I found myself really enjoying getting to know the characters of your story. I almost felt, I was right there amongst them, watching it all unfold before me. can't wait to read the rest ^_^

fantastic!!!

Kazehana552Kazehana552almost 13 years ago

I loved this story the first time I read it, and now I know why. Its amazing. I wish you would write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It needs sex between Sam and Tilly... Then Fin and Dill have a little action Tom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
just finding this

I've totally drunk the koolaid and will be ignoring all my obligations to read through this. (It's interesting to read other comments-some one wants Sam/Tilly action? Did they not READ the story' sheesh!)

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