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Well that was interesting.
I liked it a little strange but good.
STRANGE!!!!!!
This, indeed, was a very strange story. Didn't exactly explain what happened and there was nothing to really base a guess upon. Story needs some basis in fact and could use some greater explanation.
not bad
inventive and mysterious. Not entirely successful in its conclusion.
Good until the end
I thoroughly enjoyed the story until the punch line was delivered. I just couldn't see this happening. Great writing up until that point.
Humerous
I wished there wasa little more humour in the loving wives section. Keepit up.
Dear Strange!!!!!!
If you seriously need "more explanation" and "some basis in fact", you have absolutely no imagination at all. Read another porn story instead. Thanks, BlueFish, for a great story.
Heheheheh HO!
VERY inventive. Leave the reader imagining what happened - let the mind wander. One can only imagine where that Xmas ball ended up! ;) Hummm, did muscular contractions break the delicate glass????
Keep up the interesting prose...
Oh, and nevermind the nay-sayers who lack imagination.
I did get what the emergency Christmas
Ball was but was the last Ben-Wa balls? that I was not really sure about.
The next trip to Emergency
Will be the husband after the wife puts the ben wa balls up his ass.
There must be something wrong with me.....
I actually think I understood the ending! Thanks Blue, for sharing this gem!
String of large anal beads, ben wa balls, who care
it was a great read. Only one problem wives should not lie to their husbands, or promise things they cant deliver, she needs to beat the crap out of him, but we will wait until he is asleep of course.
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