All Comments on 'A Story For My Wife'

Don't pretend to be a cuck and wimp do it for real. See how you like it. i bet you would really like it wouldn't you? personally I hope you hATE every second of it.

Not erotic, just nasty, good luck, you'll need it.

??? this is so bad don't know to say.

I think some of the comments have been a bit harsh! Your story was good and thanks for writing it. I think it would have been better if your wife did cuckold you for real and fucked bareback without protection.

the opposit of your story. again a story of a man who has no clue about what he is writing (sorry to say that, but you really don't know what you would be getting). all your hidden wishes are more than careless. you either don't bother about your marriage anymore or you never have. why? first sharing can be fun if your always together, so there would be no time for the wife and lover alone, thats just a really good way in loosing her. in the short time together he will always care a lot more than you can in everyday life. so she will start to value him more than you because if she compares he will never disapoint her like you do in everyday life. there also should never any contact besides the time together like letters. he has nothing to do than fantasizing about her and he will do good. the next thing is no condoms. do you think about the consequenses at all? pregnant like in this story possible, aids or hepatitis because a soldier wont't do anything and you don't know what kind of guy he is, just that he allready fucked her without any condoms the first time should show, he doesn't care to much. so it's really not much fun to read this story. I don't know what strange kind of sex-kick you get out of this. the woman in this story has allready a couple secrets so it would be in real life. you never know somebody completly and this story shows you don't know yourself to good. so rethink everything, you have the talent to write an erotic story this one had not very few eroticscenes and they were killed by the possible consequences.

You are what you do and take the time to choose to write about.<P>

However you are seriously deludeding yourslf if you think this is arousing or erotic to anyone except the very few like yourself who are addicted to self demeanment and self disrespect - its really just sick male humiliation imposed by a absurdly demented submissive self destructive personality. <P>

But then you aready know that your addiction is one of the worst fetishes as that why you need it so baddly.<P>

The problem is any addiction has no bottom satisfaction wise as it will always take more to penitrate a nearly numb labido. In your case the growing need for self disrespect will envelope your life until there is no worthwhile purpose to it. Then What???<P>

Grow up - stop being so selfish and get some help - soon.

Ignore the comments left by losers. They really envy you and cannot admit it. Why would they spend time reading these stories otherwise? Every loving husband should find a black lover for his wife. He can still fuck her from time to time initially if the lover approves. At some point, however, he would notice that her pussy is stretched so much that she cannot feel his tiny dick anymore. Ay this point he should give sex with her voluntarily and cherish the thought of her white pussy being fucked by a black superior dick.

Would agree on one point - this was a totally racist pile of dog shit and just skimming this pathetic waste of time was enough to get anyone sick. Author - do not bother getting help and take this dung over to the cluck site where they relish in this garbage. Debra & Wayne

Loved it big time. Hope to see more of your work in the future but I understand that you don't want to do anymore. I've given up writing for literotica because of the trolls. Am currently working on a novel that deals with this sort of thing. However will not be posting anymore here. Too many trolls and stupid people.

read the title

Lovely, sexy story!

watch a huge black cock going up her cunt hear her beging him to fuck her harder and cum inside her make pregnant

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

You are soooo dumb and this is the reason why. Read your first paragraph asshole gay boy and then your story....do you see any correlation? Idiot!

Many years ago, when I was 26, my cum was blasting into my 22 year old wife as I told her I wanted to start sharing her pussy with others. Within a year she was laying on the hardwood floor between me and another guy as he stripped her and fucked her. Once she knew my thoughts she became more flirty and when we went out together she knew there was a chance she would be meeting a stranger for sex. During the next 12 years she took care of about forty guys and a couple of ladies. All that time she was a wonderful wife and mother.

His fantasy was to watch...she absolutely agreed.. the first thing she did was get fucked in the bathroom with hubby outside the closed door... then the next day he's sent to the beach so they can be alone..then he returns from service and they're alone again... so if you can't figure it out by now... I fuckin hate cheaters.. liars..dishonest .. rule breaking slut whores.... this bitch doesn't really love her husband and he better watch her a lot closer...she cannot be trusted

Nice story. Be nice if she'd risk getting pregnant maybe before he goes back overseas to a combat zone. Just a thought.