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Calling His Bluff

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/24/08

Sorry

Just not for me.

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by digdaddyrich11/24/08

She didn't get any satisfaction from either men

One of the guys should have went down on her and gave her some satisfaction, especially since both men had an orgasm. You just have to take care of a woman who will go that far to push her husband's buttons on his fetish.I think you need to write a story where the wife gets fulfilled, and that she finally agrees with her husband, that in a controlled situation, that extramarital sex would be enjoyable,especially if the new lover had a big penis....Rich

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio11/25/08

Not believable.

50% for fairly good writing, 0% for the plot. Firstly, our wife heroine Sheila gave in awfully easily. She basically had sex with Dan while hubby Jon watched. I'm not using the Clinton definition of sex, by the way. She was supposedly dead-set against doing anything with another man but succumbed with no argument with the excuse she was calling her husband's bluff . . . lawyers like to win arguments, not lose them. Secondly, there was nothing in her character to suggest she was looking to go extra-curricular. In fact, the story was too short to really develop any characters to the extent that the reader could really understand and/or identify with them. Actions have consequences and if there are one or more chapters, I would be interested to see if the story could be better developed in a more realistic way. Thanks for writing.

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by sirhugs11/25/08

great build up

would have liked more story. it was hot, but ended too quickly.

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by Anonymous07/14/10

Anticipation?

Maybe...oh yes!
She didn't have sex, she would be rubbing her legs together to help with the itch that built up so...what do you think? Yes, she would fantasize, and while she was picturing the events of the past few minutes, she would masturbate to an explosive and overwhelming orgasm!
As she recovered, her thoughts would begin to think about the what ifs' of other possibilities, maybe her husband had a good idea, what about some of the men she met while away on business...some of them were hot...hmmm - Maybe? Maybe YES and suddenly a totally earthshaking orgasm and she wasn't even touching herself! Oh yes, sex was going to be euphoric from now on!!!
2nd Chapter?

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by Anonymous02/23/14

nice work!

Very well written - too many awful writers on this site, but this was very well done!!

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by Anonymous10/19/15

Get with the program

Tell the wife she is few to play and you as husband will be loyal and happy with seconds.
This is now the way it is and should be.

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