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Unwished for Gift Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/26/08

quite short

seems like this could be interesting but the chpt is so short. please make them longer in the future.

also, the way you switch between scenarios (caitlyn an aaron, kyle and gabriel, etc) could be a tad smoother.

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by Anonymous11/26/08

Nice beginning!!!

Interesting set-up. I'm looking forward to Ch.02 and the following.
-- KK in Texas

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by Anonymous12/02/08

Not enough

These servings are too small.

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by Anonymous01/07/09

unwished for gift

im waiting on a next chapter please dont leave it on finished love the story want to see what happens please and thank u.

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