All Comments on 'One Lonely Night'

A spelling error was seen but it didn't detract from the story that rushed along at an over-the-speed-limit pace. For future reference, satin is generally very difficult to rip. If she really wants it just like the story, call me.

I enjoyed this story! I think that should perhaps work with an editor on some minor grammar/spelling issues. But the content was amazing. I especially enjoyed the ending. I'm a 24 year old girl, and while it might be nice to fantasize about being taken against my will, I'd be horrified if it ever actually happened.

Keep up the great writing! :-)

I enjoyed this story! I think that should perhaps work with an editor on some minor grammar/spelling issues. But the content was amazing. I especially enjoyed the ending. I'm a 24 year old girl, and while it might be nice to fantasize about being taken against my will, I'd be horrified if it ever actually happened.

Keep up the great writing! :-)