Seriously.. I love the way the story is progressing! I'm also glad you corrected Chapter Two!!!! I voted on it, but couldn't comment :-( Anyways, thanks for sharing your talent!
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Anonymous11/26/08
Hmmm
I know Marcellus is a sexy sexy man but I wish Darien would be more assertive. When she says no she needs to mean it and let Marcellus know she means it. She's letting him dominate her a little too much especially, at this point in time when sex is their only relationship.
Loving it, keep it coming!
I've heard that rough sex is good? I guess I will never know; they seemed to enjoy it greatly=Freaks...
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Anonymous07/30/13
Truer words have never been spoken...
"She had to forget, lest she be shackled to him and she could only guess what hell that would bring..."
Uh...where's all this UNprotected sex going to lead to? I HOPE she's on the Pill!
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Anonymous08/16/13
RESPONSE to Anon:
Loosen up...why are you taking this story to the extreme? This is litEROTICa! Someone's fantastical thoughts and mode of escapism. Maybe not yours, so calm down. If not, write your own story.
English
HOT!
another hot, spicy chapter,showing their rollercoaster emotions. Well done!
Awesome!
Seriously.. I love the way the story is progressing! I'm also glad you corrected Chapter Two!!!! I voted on it, but couldn't comment :-( Anyways, thanks for sharing your talent!
Hmmm
I know Marcellus is a sexy sexy man but I wish Darien would be more assertive. When she says no she needs to mean it and let Marcellus know she means it. She's letting him dominate her a little too much especially, at this point in time when sex is their only relationship.
Loving it, keep it coming!
Great Update!!!
I wish they woul both admit that they are falling for each other...more please!!!
Rough Ride
I've heard that rough sex is good? I guess I will never know; they seemed to enjoy it greatly=Freaks...
Truer words have never been spoken...
"She had to forget, lest she be shackled to him and she could only guess what hell that would bring..."
Uh...where's all this UNprotected sex going to lead to? I HOPE she's on the Pill!
RESPONSE to Anon:
Loosen up...why are you taking this story to the extreme? This is litEROTICa! Someone's fantastical thoughts and mode of escapism. Maybe not yours, so calm down. If not, write your own story.
Uhh again, he must have a golden member LOL,
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