Part of the Fogg index for readability includes the number of sentences and how many are in a paragraph. Longer words and longer sentences in longer paragraphs do not make for easy reading or readability, if that is indeed one of your goals. The length for all three in the Index gives a higher degree of education to understand. Is this what you want?
Normally I would make this a private comment, but you want everything public.
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Please try for more but shorter paragraphs
Part of the Fogg index for readability includes the number of sentences and how many are in a paragraph. Longer words and longer sentences in longer paragraphs do not make for easy reading or readability, if that is indeed one of your goals. The length for all three in the Index gives a higher degree of education to understand. Is this what you want?
Normally I would make this a private comment, but you want everything public.
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