very fun story. I loved the ending!!
the story were longer and in more detail. more depth in their relationship, but i guess i'm just a hopeless romantic hahaha. was really good though!! i loved it!
I wish you would show rather than tell a bit more. Otherwise, witty and fun to read! Good luck in the contest!
Such a lovely, little story. Keep up the writing!
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very nice story!
very fun story. I loved the ending!!
would have been perfect if........
the story were longer and in more detail. more depth in their relationship, but i guess i'm just a hopeless romantic hahaha. was really good though!! i loved it!
An unusual plot....
I wish you would show rather than tell a bit more. Otherwise, witty and fun to read! Good luck in the contest!
Very nice!
Such a lovely, little story. Keep up the writing!
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