This was an amazing short shory. I loved the imagery. Beautiful.
rating of a story of 750 words, then yes, good. But...there is so much more here for you to flesh out. Keep writing Icetiger, say all that you need to say and you will have many who will relate.
There was a richness to this story I enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! (PS- Be careful of "It's" versus "its")
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Beautifully written.
This was an amazing short shory. I loved the imagery. Beautiful.
sweet, but there needs to be more
rating of a story of 750 words, then yes, good. But...there is so much more here for you to flesh out.
Keep writing Icetiger, say all that you need to say and you will have many who will relate.
"less is more"
There was a richness to this story I enjoyed. Good luck in the contest! (PS- Be careful of "It's" versus "its")
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