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Tears in a Dry Land Ch. 01

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by SoCalOvid11/28/08

Ah! Ygraine as Sheherazade...

and, beloved, you are spared tomorrow from death, for we wish to hear the end of your story...and then perhaps, another day, and another. LOL! Excellent beginning, look forward to your 'Thousand plus One'.

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by Anonymous11/28/08

Nice beginning!!!

This story is looking appealing. Parts make me wonder if it belongs in "sci-fi" instead, but we'll see what the author does with the storyline.
-- KK in Texas

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by Anonymous11/29/08

promising beginnings

Wonderful way to beguile us to read more- well written, intriguing, and well edited. Cheers.

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