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lizzie_love69lizzie_love69over 15 years ago
Good job

This was a really nice story. The only complaint I have is that there were a few editing errors that took me out of the story a bit.

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I read, write, sing and draw. I believe that there is more to sexuality than just the blunt points of tab a inserting into tab b. The most erotic stories, and personal experiences happen and come to life when both the physical and the mental aspects are combined. i hope y...