by Kirk482002
A worthy follow up to Ditzy Donna which I consider the best humor story on this site. Maybe you will write about Ralph and Looney Louise. Now I understand why Ralph and Donna had only one child.
Boyd
I don't mean the story either. This sequel to Ditzy Donna is a fun ride. If you have about 20 minutes to spare, read it. Donna is still a ditz, Ralph is still clueless, and the cast of characters around them help make this story entertaining.
There's enough sex to tie the whole thing together.
This is the first story from Kirk in three years. His bio says he's been sick. I say he came up with a great one to announce his return and welcome back!
Two thumbs up!
Pu Pu for Two!
Allen
All this mentioning of food's got Sancho in a frenzy. His fat ass can't fit on his donkey anymore and all you write about is food! Well, sex and food, or food and sex. Where are all the damsels in distress and giant windmills to slay? It is a good sequel and you did a good job being under the weather and such. Thanks for the story, but I have to go. Sancho is eating his saddle.
Man
This story is a work of art, true to life dialogue, and so believable. And now for your next...
Funny. I really liked the characters before and you still got them going in great style. Loved it. More Ditzy Donna, please.
I tried to imagine who the two Paulies reminded me of and I keep picturing Sil from the Sopranos as Toucan and Paulie Walnuts as asshole. Fat busted flush reminded me of Jelly from Analyze This. Donna's still ditzy and Ralph's still anal.
Found a typo but I'll forgive you.
Happy holidays Kirk.
Mort
Made me chuckle and I didn't want it to end.
Super..
Good stuff, moves along slowly but steadily, not too much a a rush.
One for savouring rather than swigging.
Still trying to figure out if you are Ralph, his dad or his granddad. Also feeling sympatico with Donna.
merry christmas, whoever you are.
In the current vernacular, LOF-LMAO. Just a hoot from start to finish.
I do love the characters you create. It's rare to find an author who can convey humor so effectively in writing. Keep up the great work!
... are what I get from this story. I love reading about Ralph and Donna and their crazy town and the people who live in it. You have a real gift for humor and also for portraying the growing relationship between Donna and Ralph. I hope you write more about them at some point. :)
I read "Ditzy Donna" about seven years ago, and never realized it had a sequel until now. It was a lot of fun to read.
just read both stories. they're awesome! definitely think you should add a few more!
This is fav. story nice work friend!123,446,789,120 StaRs gOoD SiR mwahahahaha!
I haven't read anything this funny in a long, long while. Well done!
Reslly enjoying your stories, hope there are many more to come.
I loved both of your Ditzy stories. Fun and sexy. You are a good author. I have read more than a few of your stories. thank you