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You Can't Succeed Without Trying

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by Anonymous11/29/08

Great story!

This is one of those fairly stort stories that just make me long for the sequel.. :-D

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by Irish Mister12/27/08

Great Story

The premise and the events were unlikely... but WHO CARES? Very entertaining, a real pleasure to read! The way you developed the action, and the explanations you created were perfect for keeping the story moving and (this) reader engaged.

Thanks!

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