Of Candy Canes and Pinewood Dildos

Very Nice

i hope there will be more chapters!

Short and very sweet.

I don't know how you pulled it off in such a short story, but you did. The ending was very interesting. Well done.

Sweet

May be they'll have a nice holiday together,and his other daughter and ex-wife will show up for some family fun.

oh yess!!

SEQUEL PLEASE!!

I actually kind of liked this.....

Your writing is fascinating in the way you paint pictures with only a few words. In the hands of a lesser writer, this would have gone on forever......good job!

I cannot possibly imagine a branch fron a 5' 6" pine tree being capable of being made into a dildo - stupid idea made a potetially ok story into pure rubbish.......

Enjoyable

I found this story quite enjoyable. I especially liked the ending. Keep writing.