The confession

Good

yes , we really like that one

Great Story

Wonderful twist.

Loved it.

I thought this was really well done. It was short and sweet, I loved the husbands humor. Perhaps if you wanted to add some more dark humor you could have done so during those 10min that the wife had to decide. Other than that I thought it was a great little story.

What do you mean ...it don't happen in real life?

It does too and the husbands that do it are, in my book, straight up. Good idea to let the wife have to decide to save him or not. Make her aware of what she has done. It should also have the effect of making would be predators have a second thought before fucking up their life for a peice of cunt...drippy cunt at that.

Good Story

The ending took a really good short story and made it silly. Up until that point it had a lot of real emotions to it and flowed well. I liked the idea of the threat at the end, but the idea that she would let a man die, or at least let her husband go to prison over it. You took a good idea too far. Other than that, it was a good story. M

Nice Twist BUT she didnt confess toa nything

Good story...one of this authors better ones. But she did NOT confess to anything. He had to drag it out of her.

Stalling and lying by omission is NOT confessing. Even in the UK. So by the very premise the husband sets up to see if their marriage survives the night... she failed.

Good Story

Well paced and dramatic. The only problem is that I am not sure that her reply was the correct one in the social context. After all I would never enjoy allowing another person die in order to maintain my marraige. Basically I would feel that the marraige was over anyway because I would not remain with spouse who would do such things.
Or put such things on me. This girls night ou business always seems to be too dangerous, anyway.
Thanks for an interesting story... and well written one.

Cop is a fool

You would have gotten 100 if not for this statement:"The finger fucking ___ well that was a bit different of course, but I was sure it had been the first time it had happened, and that after this trauma, she'd think very long and hard before she even looked at another man again." By taking her back this foolish cop condones her actions. Next time she will have to be more discrete but there will be a next time. He also has no clue for how long and what she has done with Norman or the guy before him. Throw her to the curb. And for Gods sake don't fuck her you don't know where that cunt has been.

Bullshit

As far as she knows, he is about to commit murder. Not doing anything about it would make her an accomplice. Trying to "save" Norman is a greater act of love for her husband. Fantasy, schmantasy.

please, man

the little woman has suffered enough, oh, please, lord! stop torturing her. she is dying from her suffering, big and awesome brother,,, your penetrating logic and interrogation,,, they're just killing your woman! LOL

Some good some bad

Good story. Bad choice by the husband. If a wife will do this. Let someone finger fuck her, take her bra and knickers as a trophy. What does that tell you about the wife? What's more what does this tell you about the husband?
He allows this to happen? And then when she asks to go to bed he says "yes,sure no problem" And he accepts that 'at parties' when his friends are drunk they can touch up his wife? And as for his friend TOM, Tom accepts that his wife is cheating on him and does nothing about it? Just lets her carry on? Sorry I know the writer said people don't react like this and he's right about that one. And to Harry, BRITEASE LIVES IN FRANCE NOT the UK.

Great! What a Twist at the End!

No wimpy husband here. Well done. Interesting decision by the cheating wife.

good story

Another one of your good works that has a guy wondering just what is going to happen almost from the start. Keep up the good work.

nice try to..

find another way to hang up a pig. that was the good thing. the bad thing is we (readers)or the husband still does not know what really happened. for how long are the 3 girls going out weekly. how many more "johns" exist. I would personally believe her less now than before. she never told him anything until he proved it and not to forget by all the love you can have for someone, she would have let died the guy just to protect herself so hubby would not ask any more questions about that night or other nights. I would guess she is guilty as hell for cheating for a long long time allready. so the idea was very good the implementation misses a bit of precision.

Well-written

But stupid. Any man will tell you this truism: Get a married woman to either remove her panties or touch your naked cock and game, set, match. She'll not stop her behavior. She'll only be more careful next time. Remember this, Author, if you remember nothing else: Behavior rewarded is behavior repeated.

Mixed feelings but I admire your writing effort.

Average writing, rates a 50%. While I understand the need to exact revenge, especially on the the bastard who was a sexual predator (favoring married women, nonetheless), using one's police powers in order to maim or possibly kill another individual does not strike me as exhibiting bravery or manliness. It's pretty easy to beat someone up when you are two, he is one, you and your fellow officer have weapons (and he does not), and what's more, he's restrained by handcuffs. You might as well shoot him in the kneecaps, or use a baseball bat on him. Actually, in real life, you would need to kill him, because if not, he will certainly tell others who beat him up and broke his legs. I know police protect each other but it's more and more difficult to get away with it, especially when it's so out in the open. The Abner Louima case (1997, New York City) where a Haitian immigrant was injured by police who shoved a toilet plunger handle up his rectum, damaging both his bowel and bladder and requiring two months in the hospital for recovery, is a notorious example but there are many others (http://www.answers.com/topic/list-of-cases-of-pol ice-brutality). I know it's just a story but there needs to be some credibility to the characters and the plot for a reader to be able to relate to the subject at hand. I also agree with other comments -- if my wife permitted a man to finger her, let alone grope her, then our marriage would be history because I could never trust her again.

I wouldn't believe a thing she said

If he caught her with her panties off, she would lie to the 'Pope himself' to save her meal ticket and her ass. She may not have fucked the guy that night, but how many times did she have a rendezvous in the parking lot, and not get caught? How many times did her husband kiss her when she finally came home,acting like the loving and faithful wife,with the semen from another man still in her mouth.How many times did she allow a man other than her husband, to fill her vagina with his hard cock and ejaculate deep within her body? I don't see how he could ever trust her, and how he could ever let her back in his bed. I would like to read what the wife really was up to on her night out. Let her tell it in her own words,but not to her husband. Let her continue with her charade of marriage to her husband, but explain herself to her close friend.....Rich

Good revenge...

... for a wimp.

Needs A Different Ending

Now that the husband and wife have settled their differences let's see what we have in the way of a marriage.From Jenny's POV she is married to a murderer and is herself an accomplice to murder. Gerry is aware that there has been no murder but knows that his wife condones murder by putting her marriage ahead of saving the life of a fellow human being. We can only hope that neither of them stray in the future as it could end up with wholesale slaughter of their various lovers.The story was well told. Britease is a very good writer. The story had a lot of tension but was too short to exploit the tension or the nature of the two main characters. It would have been nice to follow the story as it explored future 'girls nights out' and the effects on her marriage when she strayed.

Wow, what a fuckup

I like the wife and I can see why she would cheat on him....her husband's a fucking murderer....or at least she believes he is.

Great story only the slut got away with it, again!

Honestly, she did not suffer at all. That part does not settle well with the grievous behavior on her part. Keep it up and look for decent revenge endings from Papatoad but stay away from the bullshit that Angiquesophie spews.

An Interesting Variation But

Who would tolerate a spouse with this track record now witnessed.

Most every story is written as a segment of life as its basis especially here to drag out emotions. In that process there are reasonable expectations of the writer and the story no matter the fictional intent.

Would any husband go to bed with her having seen her intentions played out undiless? Sure its just a story but the story's intention was to evoke emotions as real life would have.

Therein lies the need for writer growth if they choose to write credibly about life and not stroke.

I think you have potential writer but need to decide your eventual intention of either entertaining credibility or fluff.

What the hell!

At least he wasn't jacking off watching. As I found out in my youth, fucking someones woman can be a painfull experience if your lucky, or a lot worse if your not. Thanks.

Lets have more

This could not be the only time the wife has played away, lets hear more confessions.

The real question...

did she really believe him and was truly conflicted or did she see through the ruse and played him like she did all along? well that's the real dilemma of people who decide to accommodate habitual liars...
And I enjoyed this story...thanks Britease!

WOW! Mixed feelings on this one!

Good writing but lousy characters and plot. If this happens in real life and no doubt it does it certainly explains why there are so many fucked up marriages. Gerry bases his acceptance of his wife's slutty behavior if she tells him the "truth." She does not tell the truth. What we have is Gerry telling Jenny the truth as he knows it. Lastly, we have Gerry giving her an impossible choice. GO along with murder or end the marriage. Once again that is not the true choice. Jenny is either afraid that Gerry will do her in or she suspect that her lover is beat up but alive. So if she goes to rescue her lover given his police authority she will not find him and her life will be over. Do either of these people love the other or do they know what the word means? Gerry happens to catch Jenny this night. What about the earlier nights out with the girls? Gerry and his partner grabbing her lover is the only reason Jenny did not get fucked that night. So what happens next? How long do Jenny stay scared of Gerry? Since Jenny and the truth live on different planets the only way Gerry will know he is not getting sloppy seconds is to keep her under surveillance 24 hours a day. As to John being a predator it takes two to tango.

Care if the pig loved you?

"I would soon find out just how much Jenny really loved me." At this point what difference would it make how much the pig loved you? Someone else has been geting her "loving."

Well written

But really now, Jenny condones having her lover murdered to save her marriage? Would you really want to be married to someone like that?

I guess Gerry does. I actually thought the two broken legs and the beating to be enough but then I am sure that Tom has issues still. Wonder why he is staying with June.

Not your best but thanks for sharing.

Can we start getting pic's of the male leads??

Just curious to see a pic or get a description of some of these hubbies. Heroes in most of these stories must be some of the most desperate, ugliest, penniless, most revolting looking and acting guys on the planet, considering all the shit they swallow and still keep these bitches. How else could someone watch their wife get felt up, fingered and lose her undies to a guy and then take her to bed. Not to even mention the ones who catch the wives having sex. Come on guys, WTF. There must be some babe out there who'd appreciate you enough not to bring this stuff home, even if you (or her) look like quasimoto.

Original

A good read. The condensed nature of the story gives it intensity. Original consequence for both cheaters.

Good Story...

...for a wimp story. I'm sure she'll be more careful in the future. More careful not to get caught, that is.

Not bad!!!

Yup... ball's in his court now. Okey dokey... what does he do?? I mean man she doesn't go to save the scumbag so she earned a point? Man, life's a looooong journey and such a faithful wife will never ever stray... isn't so??

No...NOT BAD AT ALL

It's so good to see when a husband isn't a simpering, whimpering wimp

Must be da dumb brit season . . .

'confession' is voluntary, 'admission' is not, it has to be draw out from the perpetrator dummy. Brit definitions must be different than my dictionary. GET IT CORRECT next time shit head!

now this

is a story with a happy ending...to bad he really didnt handcuff the guy to a piling....the next day there would have been no evidence as to who killed him ...and the police would probably see it as a drug killing and let it go...what with his reputation

What is the Obamination guy doing talking about

English, how would an eubonics character know any?

Well done.....

Norman will be limpin' around a long time, sorta like that PUTA, OBAMANATION. Cheers

Methinks this writer is a bit confused about . . .

the definitions of the words 'confession' and 'admit' in using them in her stories. Look them up and find out in a real dictionary, not on-line.

Loved it...

The bitch let her lover.......oh, the possibilities you have with this one. I know, I'll read more.

That is the sort....

of power that I'd love to have. LOL. Great story. Keeps these types going, Mate.

the dirty slut should been handcuffed with him

The cops should be sent to prison for their crimes.

However, cops have a license to do whatever they wish including cold blooded murder include murder of women and children and the handicaped.

Story line was clever, with interesting twists.

Would like to have had more about the woman's choices and reasons. That would have made her more interesting. As it is she's just a faithless wife.
The end wasn't very satisfying. Didn't look like love to me to just go to bed, especially with the hidden information finally revealed by hubby.

Sorry...

...not really worth a comment, good or bad.

Oh Man.

What the fuck are you doing to me with these fucking stories today?
What to do:
Give the bitch the key, throw her out and lock the door, never looking back. That's what to do.

What?

Britease should call himself Britwimp!

A lot of mixed messages fron start to finish, but there's no doubt this was a fine read !

All haters of cognitive dissonance should avoid this story like the plague ( or a gerndame's wife ) .

I can't make my mind up about this one!

Yes, it was clever and full of dark humour. Yes, the wife deserved a LOT of retribution at the hands of her husband... but....
If that was a real situation, I think the time he gave her to think about it would have been enough for her to work out that he hadn't really left her would-be lover in the situation he described - which is probably why she'd agree to leave things as they were. He would have thrown a scare into her, and the information about the guy's previous affair would have put her off messing with him again. At the same time, the effect of such a scare wouldn't have been permanent.
If I'd done something like that, I think my husband would have put me across his knee and paddled my ass - wa-ay past the point where I might enjoy it and on until it really hurt so much that I would never risk it again.
Still a good story, though! :)

After a lot of recent rubbish

it's always good to turn to the touch of class that's a Britease story. Short, original and written with genuine style (and if Newjayne's husband doesn't want to paddle her ass well, I'm available!) :-))

you can always count on britease to do a good inventive story.