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Here to Stay Ch. 09

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by Anonymous

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by Watercrazy12/01/08

beautiful ending

I loved it. I cant wait for your next story!!!

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Love these two

Ive loved this series the whole way through. Your writing is phenomenol and your charcaters are so adorable. Hope I'll be reading more from you soon.

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by blunajana12/23/08

Perfect

I loved your Story and I can't wait for new ones. So please submit the chapters as soon as possible. Thanks

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by Anonymous01/02/09

Wonderful

Really enjoyed the whole series. Thank you for sharing it.

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by Anonymous02/14/09

Spectacular!

You have no idea how brilliant your story is! It was simply breathtaking. Your writing ability is superb.

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by Anonymous08/13/09

hhhmmm

i thought emmette was going to get back his sight. how did he saw the script in the hospital anyway?

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by Anonymous03/23/10

What a great story.

This was a wonderful and sweet story. I loved the characters and the storyline with all the internal & external challenges they had to overcome. I hope that sometime soon you will sumit yet another of your stories. It's been almost a year and a half since your last posting. Please share with us again.

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by cpm0906/26/10

Wonderful!

I loved every chapter. thank you.

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by Anonymous07/31/10

Gorgeous story!

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by feelinromantic10/28/10

hidden treasure!

i cant believe i missed this when it first got posted, but better late than never..very much better in fact. Ive been so addicted that ive read it all in one night. Thank u for a great story :-)

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by alexandra3612/29/10

Truly beautiful!

The story made me laughed, smiled, cried, and everything else in between. Astoundingly beautiful!

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by Anonymous04/25/11

???

Tres bien. BEAUTIFUL story. Really tugged on my heartstrings.

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by Ex0ticPrincess06/08/11

Great story
:)

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by Ex0ticPrincess06/08/11

Great story
:)

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by TopBitchK06/29/11

BEAUTIFUL

When I started reading this series of stories, I wasn't sure I would enjoy reading them. Boy, was I wrong. It was a joy to follow the characters and the story line. I was just a little disappointed in the last chapter though, it seem a bit rushed and too short. :)

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by Anonymous01/17/12

Aww

Such a süß story. Very sweet. Maybe a little close borderline sappy/kitschy/cheesy for my tastes BUT I enjoyed it very much.

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by hk47enclave01/26/12

Really enjoyed this series.

Keep up the great job.

:)

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amazing

you have such a way with words, you pulled me into this story. I really felt fpr the characters and i wanted to cry along with them every time something bad happened, it tugged at my heart strings that much

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by dinkyboots04/22/12

its a pity he didnt get his sight back after the accident.? thats what i expected...it would have been a nice ending...however it was a wonderful story and i loved every bit of it..

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by lonesomedove6610/24/12

Lovely

Very well written I was hooked from the first chapter to the end, I do agree with Dinky though it is a pity that the car accident didn't shock his sight back but a beautiful, romantic story

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by Anonymous12/01/12

I know it's twee but can't we have another chapter or two and a Hollywood ending where he gets his sight back?

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by lonleylucas03/20/13

i agree

id love to see him get his sight back

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by bythewx06/10/13

I like that he doesn't have his sight. For me, it makes the story all the more romantic. Excellent job :)

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by daireto11/02/13

I was really hoping

that Emmett would get his sight back because there was no medical reason for him to lose it.

But great story anyway :)

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by Anonymous11/24/13

Great story!

Except I was sure the accident would restore Emmetts sight. :(

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by baikalisan08/01/14

Sight

The part about no medical reason for his sight to be gone led me to believing he would get his sight, at least in part, back. The fact that he didn't was a bit disappointing but I 100% realize that all things don't necessarily have that happy of an ending. Overall I very much enjoyed this story and I thank you for submitting it!

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by Anonymous05/07/15

I DID EXPECT THAT HIS SIGHT WOULD RETURN AFTER HIS ACCIDENT BUT I MUST SAY I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR WORK ..BIG J

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by kmillerk106/12/15

AHHHHH

I was hoping for his sight to return as well, but a beautiful story with a happy ending, :)

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by Anonymous03/07/16

Even I thought emmets sight migjt come back
Awesome story
Loved it

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