All Comments on 'A Daemon's Heart Ch. 01-02'

And different. :) I like both Kael and Elyah, so I do hope you keep the story going. The sex is always fun, but good characters and plot trump everything, so please -- write away!

Great start!

I'm so interested to see where you go from here. Do tell :)

I'm immediately drawn into the scenario you've created. Real monsters often look human. I'm rooting for both characters to continue to find out more about each other in order to heal the hidden and visable scars. I'm sensing they both bear various layers of pain. Great begining update soon please.

I think u did a wonderful job and I cant even think straight coz i just want 2 skip 2 the next part of the story :)

What a good start to a story. Though, how did she know what she did...what he had done for her? Does she have more power than a normal human? I would question how she was so easily ok with what he is...no surprise even? I can't imagine how horrible her family could be. Who actually tortured her? Was it her brother/father? jeez, sick people huh. I look forward to reading on.

Im liking this story already!!! cant wait to get to the rest....now gotta go see to the kids :-) Cant wait till bed time..LOL!!!

A little cheesy, but a really great setup so far. :)

Its the first story ive read on this site and thank goodness its a great one......I like cant wait to read the rest....

Daemons do not have compassion, especially those who leave 400 years and get to see the Middle Ages and World Wars ...

The start of the story is confusing, I was put off by it.

Maybe if the daemon had suddenly got his soul back, or had some spell lain on him, it would make more sense.