All Comments on 'High and Low Ch. 03'

by bisexualsmoker

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
mad!

This works better than the previous chapter I think. I really like your style of writing, though it's not really 'erotic' as such. I still think you need to get an editor though. I'd also like it if they were a bit longer. Maybe combine chapters or something?

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