This is a really great story. Some folks can't handle a good non-linear tale but then again I like Tarantino movies. Yes it is long, but sometimes you have to tell the entire story.
My favorite part is where George's 'beast' is almost unleashed. I can only wonder if the author has felt such strong conflicting emotions to write them the way he did.
It is worth the read, trust me!
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Anonymous06/10/15
loved the story! Gave you a 5
thwe only garbage on here is you dear annony!! Eat shit and die!!
by
Anonymous06/10/15
like eating honey
Ever eat a whole jar of honey at one sitting? The first few bites and swallows are so good, but by the time one gets towards the center of the jar it becomes a little much sweetness, and by the end it is nauseous and overwhelming.
Such is this tale. Long, boring, and extreme.
Thanks any how.
English
Excellent work!
Excellent, not a run-of-the-mill story. Please try to do more in this vein. Very well done. Thank you.
Stupid and arogant writ, a mindless prattle about nothing much.
It seems there is no structure to the story, as if the writer thought of a different story after each chapter. All disconnected and meaningless.
Very inept effort from this "writer" !
MY KINGDOM FOR AN EDITOR!
Maybe. Just maybe. You had a story in there. But 20 pages later, this was simply a giant pile of garbage. What a complete waste of time.
I read about the first three pages of this trash and then scrolled to this page.
Only so I could complain about your style, the story itself etc. What a bunch of garbage!
Good, but wordy
Very good, in not a little wordy. Your use of descriptive words was just a little over top. Once I got past them, the story was very interesting.
word of shit
Long winded crap
I read two pages and even that was to much.
AWESOME!
This is a really great story. Some folks can't handle a good non-linear tale but then again I like Tarantino movies. Yes it is long, but sometimes you have to tell the entire story.
My favorite part is where George's 'beast' is almost unleashed. I can only wonder if the author has felt such strong conflicting emotions to write them the way he did.
It is worth the read, trust me!
loved the story! Gave you a 5
thwe only garbage on here is you dear annony!! Eat shit and die!!
like eating honey
Ever eat a whole jar of honey at one sitting? The first few bites and swallows are so good, but by the time one gets towards the center of the jar it becomes a little much sweetness, and by the end it is nauseous and overwhelming.
Such is this tale. Long, boring, and extreme.
Thanks any how.
Bravo!
This is my favorite story on this site. Yes it is long but it is massive excellent!
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