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Playing at Work is Dangerous Ch. 14

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by Anonymous

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by freelovepeace12/04/08

hahaha

good for Michael... that sorry cuck!

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by Anonymous12/04/08

14 chapt.

I think thats enough slut and cockold to get it, if you have anything else you want to say with this story, now would be a good time, little wimp dicked hubbies are a dime a dozen and not interesting and Jen is full blown slut, so what, 2 million stories about sluts, so show us what you got or fold.

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by Anonymous12/04/08

If you can ever write something

With the tiniest amount of real life in it. Let the marriage end here. The husband now knows how the wife feels she does 'love' Randy. Her husband will never again be enough for her. Sad really, A happy marriage torn apart by a selfish husband who dreamt of becoming a wimp and a cuck. And a woman who went along with it. Just let the marriage be fair do the desent thing and let Randy take care of Jen that's what she wants and that's what he wants. Although possibly he just wants to fuck her and to fuck over a white man. Steal the slut then dump her or give her to his 'brothers' that's what normally happens in these stories.
So to sum up the husband should REALLY divorce the wife. The wife should REALLY just do what she has been doing which is to get fucked as much as she can. It's what she is good at. Then when the husband is cut loose he should leave the area because everyone will know what happened. All his friends and work collegues will know he was cucked by a black man with, surprise, a bigger dick than him. They will also know that he did this to himself. As I said sad really. The other thing I would say is that this Drama stopped being erotic sometime ago.

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by Anonymous12/04/08

Let the Game Continue

I think we know the direction the story is going but it needs a little follow through.Possibly a week away for wife and lover to really take it up a notch then who knows whats next.

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by digdaddyrich12/05/08

Mike hasn't had enough humiliation yet

Michael should suffer a lot more humiliation for being so stupid. Having his wife fuck someone else to satisfy his fantasy,is one thing, but letting Jen fuck the same man more than once was real stupid on his part. Giving her a open marriage to date Randy is the ruination of her love for him.Thanks for the good story.....Rich

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by Anonymous12/05/08

Writer is Hung up on Death Wish ending!

Compare this tale to the last one Legs wrote -"Second Thoughts" Same sad tale of a wife forced into sex with another man by her husband , and ends up falling for him ------Odds are she will fall for Randy and ditch her husband - anybody wanna bet??---Writer must be telling his own story here!

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by Anonymous12/05/08

Keep on the good work...

... and let the woman - not any of the men - decide in the end.

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by michael195012/05/08

wish the husband had some guts.

I think when he saw that jerk randy smirk it was time to end him you know, can't stand guys that gloat, if your gonna share your wife fine , but if the jerk dissrespects the husband he better be lookin for an exit, or diggin his own grave. Thats the way I see it, size ain't all that much, most gals i've been with prefer talant over size anytime. It's time Michael grew a pair an throw the jerk out on his keester. I mean if you have so litte self respect, give some to your character there must be an equalizer somewhere in his house or nearby he could clobber Randy with. Shotguns do come in handy at times like these.

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by Anonymous12/07/08

Wimp and Cuck and slut.

They don't have a marriage anymore.

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by KlausTheMaus12/14/08

Well, anonymi,

that's why this is literotica, not just any fundamental family values propaganda site. Keep up the good work, xleglover, and carry on. Let her decide in the end. We are in desperate need for strong women here who will give all these comment ayatollahs a very long run.

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by screwher10/20/13

My wife and Randy

I'm really getting into this series now. Since chapter 10 this has been spelling out my own sexual fantasizes. My wife's boss' name is Randy and I've been fantasizing about him screwing her. Mostly in a hotel room or in his bed. After reading this now I thinking I'd like for us to invite him back to our place so he can fuck my wife in our marital bed. So hot!

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by Anonymous08/14/15

fuck you nigger.

Just bullshit.

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