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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/08/08

I'll be the first to comment

I have no respect for a man who wants other men to fuck his wife. You are all little drippy dicked scum. When I look at the economic trouble in the world andall the turmoil I think of the reason. One of them is little widdle dicked creep cuckolds like you ..(the ones that writ this shit).If I were face to face with you I would bea...no..I wouldn't dirty my hands on you or your slut women...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous12/08/08

I would start...

separating assets and take your name off of her credit cards...and not sign a long term lease on the apartment... This relationship is toast...

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by Anonymous12/08/08

A Fantasy about getting your wife gangbanged

And by Black men no less. Stupid fantasy. Stupid story. Don't worry though the cucks and wimps wil love this story.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

ignore the haters, but work on grammar

There are a bunch a jerks on this site who have nothing better to do than spew hatred. Ignored them. However, if you want people to enjoy your stories, PLEASE run spelling and grammar checks, and proof-read your story. Your story was *almost* unreadable due to all the errors.

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by digdaddyrich12/08/08

it seems a little rough on first timers

The man in the story must be proud of his wife, and proud that she is very sexy.He must have the mind set of: (If she fucks other men and still wants me then she must think I am worthy of her. The thought of her poor little body being used and abused by big mean men,and now he has to sooth her battered body, and tell her that he still loves her and forgives her for being unfaithful.)I think that would work a couple of times, but what happens when it's every weekend, how is he going to feel,especially when she starts to comment on how little his cock is. That's the life of a cuckold, isn't it?.....Rich

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Almost unreadable?

This was as bad as anything I've ever read on this site. The writing was horrible, there was nothing believable about the setup, and it was generally, well, shit.

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by don8765412/08/08

Barebacked and Diseased?

A great barebacked fucking, but obviously your fantasy did not allow for possible STDs when you fucked her cum-filled pussy, not knowing what kind of cocks had shot into her, and obviously you did not take that into account as you later showed her pregnancy.Maybe a follow-up will explain whether or not her baby was half-black, half-greaser, half-gook, or what.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Agree with majority

Have no respect for wimps who think it's wonderful to pimp out their wives. Try another occupation that doesn't require that you be a pimp for your wife.
the Ct. Yankee

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by janice k12/08/08

Black Baby Thoughts

Obviously this is one story that definitely needs a another part. You just can't leave it like this and I would love to find out that she has a black baby. Maybe then she would remember what happened, that is if she doesn't already know and just trying to play the "I don't remember what happened game"...

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by Anonymous12/08/08

I can only assume.......

that English is not your first language. If you decide to write another story, please get an editor.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Try again

I'm not into this type of story, but beside that you need a good editor to correct the choppy style of writing. Try again, practice makes perfect. Good luck.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

well at least

somebody who says it's a fantasy and that he doesn't know if he ever wants to see it. well dear writer: first you never know if it not allready happend if your wife has regular girls night out, so don't be to sure about yourself. women tend to cheat a lot more than man think. second, eventhough a fantasy , this woman described would have known a lot more, because of the bruises and the missing panties (they never forget their best panties), so if that is your fantasy it's strange. you don't want to have at least an honest wife? third, I won't talk about STD's because its a fantasy but somehow I think you still should get help somewhere because getting a sick sex kick on the back of a kid (not born yet but has to live with the consequenses of their shitty-parents) is nothing to make a joke about. that's truly perverted.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Not worth reading

Only a sick minded and deranged husband could think like that and it would serve him right if she had a black baby.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

SICK

I would have told the gang-bang whore slut out the door--she should have known better--she went to get fucked. As for you ---you are one sick puppy

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Well the husband is really an asshole!

the wife is either the company punchboard or she was raped either way he is to stupid to know or care. Any company that has female employees attend such a function without their spouse in attendence is saying very clearly our lower lever female staff are for the pleasure of our clients and upper management. In onther words she is a whore. To find your wife in such a state out on the street implies she was drunk, raped, and then put in the street to throw the company off from blame. Tis time for a lawsuit against the company for sexual harassment and allowing such actions to occur. Since it was a company function and she attended the allowing first of her to get drunk, then the sexual acts that followed are in some way the responsibility of the company. To touch her sexually, even to kiss her at this stage would be stupid. There is no way of knowing what diseases she has been exposed to and it will take months of testing to determine if she is infected with some of them like HIV/AIDS. This story belongs in a horror section due to what is happening to both of their lives for the next year.

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by Anonymous12/08/08

Hard To Comprehend writer Embarrassing Self

Pain & weakness exciting someone is hard to put in perspective for a normal person as even a child seeks to avoid negatives.

Instead we have a weak self cuck excited about raising a black bastard baby - a white one would be OK but a black gets his cock hard. What??? His wifely Renta Whore is with something not his and the writer is so excited he can't write straight.

You really need help bunkie in the attempt to respect yourself so others may.

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by Anonymous12/09/08

Opportunity missed

Hubby could have eaten her creampie as his reward for waiting patiently at home. YUMMY!!

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by Tearsofsorrow212/13/08

I am hopeful

that your wife got a life threatening STD. You deserve AIDS. I can't help but wonder what your father did wrong to raise such a useless piece of shit like you.

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by Anonymous01/21/09

I guess you know that a company that throws a big

party and excludes the spouses is opening it's self for a lot of lawsuits for alienation of affection and sexual harrassment. The husband in your story is a wimp cuckold but not me and a lot of other husbands. If this story were real i would try and get all the husbands together to sue the companies ass off. Shame on you you pathetic creature...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous02/09/09

Keep Writting

The story is a fantasy, and of course the fantasy of the writer. Don't worry about what others think. They likely have no fantasy or if they have any cuckold fantasies they are ashamed and likely feel guilty because they think they are lesser men. The bottom line cuckoldry comes in many forms and shapes, and as long as the husband and the wife or the couple are OK with it, then it is nobody else issue.
So, if the husband had those fantasies and he was finally able to fulfill them, then good for him! Keep dreaming, and keep writting! Thanks for the story!

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by shywife03/06/09

Great realistic fantasy

Nice job! You did a good job writing about a very real fantasy that many of us share. The element of really not knowing exactly what happened to your unfortunate wife, adds to the drama. The whole concept of a prim and proper wife making maybe a careless decision and ending up being taken advantage of is appealing. I would like to see more writing done on this very subject. It's a great fantasy.

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by Anonymous09/10/10

That was great, i love sleeping wife stories! Thanks

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by Anonymous02/19/11

Awesome, I have fucked my wife for real after she was dropped back home by taxi from her works do 5 hours late, and covered in cum

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by Anonymous03/03/12

nice fantasy man

I like the fact that you didnt know what happened ... and you never told her
I can just imagine what it'd feel like to slide urself into ur wife while she is dripping with a strangers cum.

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by Anonymous05/22/14

wow, somethings are better left for your imagination

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