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The Bikini Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by dereielle12/07/08

Great Start

Excellent beginning! I love the writing style!

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by Anonymous12/07/08

great

thiz is great kkep up da gud work..i love this

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by Anonymous12/07/08

can't wait for chapter 2.....

the anticipation will have me checking every day for chapter 2, good to hear the female perspective on this adventure....

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by InsatiableDesire12/08/08

I have soo been there

I know exactly what website you are talking about and I have had a very similar experience. It is so nice to hear your story!!! Looking forward to Chapter 2!!!

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by lindavy12/08/08

lovely start

lucky Dan - can't wait for the next instalment... whew!!!!

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by TonyZee12/08/08

Loved it!

One of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Loved the dirty dialogue. A definite favorite.

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by TonyZee12/08/08

Loved it!

One of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Loved the dirty dialogue. A definite favorite.

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by Agoodman95212/08/08

Great start indeed

I truly enjoyed this story, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Please don't keep us waiting to long. I also know the web sight you spoke of. I bought my wife several of their bikinis for our trip to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic. They are wicked little things and I love seeing her in them, although for a good part of the time she was only in half of them. Well keep up the good work and write more soon.

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by stevieraygovan12/08/08

A woman after my own heart...

Yes! My absolute favorite subject matter, a well written story about a woman who learns to enjoy publicly displaying her gorgeous body! Woohoo!! First she merely indulges her hubby's desire but soon it awakens in her a deep love of exhibitionism. She knows her hubby loves when she does it and he knows she loves it too, and pretty soon she won't even bother trying to deny it! Woohooo!

Seriously though, this story has unlimited potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go from here with it. Whatever you do though, please god don't ruin it by turning her into an out of control whore. Don't turn her husband into a cuckold. Other people may become involved but don't trash the husband and don't turn her into some soulless zombie who finds herself suddenly addicted to huge black cock or some other such nonsense.

Please just let them be a couple whose love only grows as they learn to appreciate their new discovery and the devastating effect it has on them and others and you'll have a classic on your hands here.

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by RossDaniels12/10/08

Off to a great start!

I love reading true stories and can't wait to see what happens next.

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by Anonymous12/13/08

wild weasel????

'nuff said?????

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by luvtoread_66012/13/08

Wonderful real life story

Love the picture, love the story, love that it's real. And I love that women like you exist - thank you on behalf of all men ;)

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by Anonymous04/05/09

A NEAR NAKED FRONTAL

GREAT START TO THIS VERY HOT HORNY STORY.THE BIKINI CH1
CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE

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by KarenPrior09/01/16

I liked this story....it is simple and it is all about happy marriaged couples sharing things together!

This story is quite simple, but well written with good context
I really enjoy it reading wall the way through it. I liked it just because it tells about a happy married couple sharing things and fantasizes together.
As a happy married woman I can see myself on this story. I love wear tiny bikinis with my husband, whether in a beach, lake or even in my backyard pool when we are partying with friends. It is hot and fell sexy!
Congrats to the Author!

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