All Comments on 'The Bikini Ch. 01'

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dereielledereielleover 15 years ago
Great Start

Excellent beginning! I love the writing style!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great

thiz is great kkep up da gud work..i love this

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
can't wait for chapter 2.....

the anticipation will have me checking every day for chapter 2, good to hear the female perspective on this adventure....

InsatiableDesireInsatiableDesireover 15 years ago
I have soo been there

I know exactly what website you are talking about and I have had a very similar experience. It is so nice to hear your story!!! Looking forward to Chapter 2!!!

lindavylindavyover 15 years ago
lovely start

lucky Dan - can't wait for the next instalment... whew!!!!

TonyZeeTonyZeeover 15 years ago
Loved it!

One of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Loved the dirty dialogue. A definite favorite.

TonyZeeTonyZeeover 15 years ago
Loved it!

One of the hottest stories I've read in a while. Loved the dirty dialogue. A definite favorite.

Agoodman952Agoodman952over 15 years ago
Great start indeed

I truly enjoyed this story, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Please don't keep us waiting to long. I also know the web sight you spoke of. I bought my wife several of their bikinis for our trip to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic. They are wicked little things and I love seeing her in them, although for a good part of the time she was only in half of them. Well keep up the good work and write more soon.

stevieraygovanstevieraygovanover 15 years ago
A woman after my own heart...

Yes! My absolute favorite subject matter, a well written story about a woman who learns to enjoy publicly displaying her gorgeous body! Woohoo!! First she merely indulges her hubby's desire but soon it awakens in her a deep love of exhibitionism. She knows her hubby loves when she does it and he knows she loves it too, and pretty soon she won't even bother trying to deny it! Woohooo!<p>

Seriously though, this story has unlimited potential. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go from here with it. Whatever you do though, please god don't ruin it by turning her into an out of control whore. Don't turn her husband into a cuckold. Other people may become involved but don't trash the husband and don't turn her into some soulless zombie who finds herself suddenly addicted to huge black cock or some other such nonsense.<p>

Please just let them be a couple whose love only grows as they learn to appreciate their new discovery and the devastating effect it has on them and others and you'll have a classic on your hands here.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Off to a great start!

I love reading true stories and can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wild weasel????

'nuff said?????

luvtoread_660luvtoread_660over 15 years ago
Wonderful real life story

Love the picture, love the story, love that it's real. And I love that women like you exist - thank you on behalf of all men ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A NEAR NAKED FRONTAL

GREAT START TO THIS VERY HOT HORNY STORY.THE BIKINI CH1

CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very nice

Truly a wife who knows how to keep love alive.

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