This can stand alone or be added to-However I would suggest that you move it to past tense if you continue.
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Anonymous12/11/08
dude!!!
u hav a wonderful start 4 a long term story. i think that u left a big opportunity 4 the siblings to really fall in love together. please continue the story, i'd luv 2 read more! sincerely Sunset_Horizons
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Anonymous06/18/09
one
pick just one point of view if you want to tell both sides do it in seperate chapters you just bore the reader when you tell both atonce
He (she) is, after all.... That should make it sweeter, not be a reason to deny, if both want to complete the relationship. Now that the Supreme Court has essentially put it's imprimatur on same sex relationships. how long before people realize there is really no reason to forbid any consensual pairing.
English
Awww
Let em get together, it'd be hot... Come on, lol.
Great story, anyhow.
Nicely done-Very imagnitive
This can stand alone or be added to-However I would suggest that you move it to past tense if you continue.
dude!!!
u hav a wonderful start 4 a long term story. i think that u left a big opportunity 4 the siblings to really fall in love together. please continue the story, i'd luv 2 read more! sincerely Sunset_Horizons
one
pick just one point of view if you want to tell both sides do it in seperate chapters you just bore the reader when you tell both atonce
Why not?
He (she) is, after all.... That should make it sweeter, not be a reason to deny, if both want to complete the relationship. Now that the Supreme Court has essentially put it's imprimatur on same sex relationships. how long before people realize there is really no reason to forbid any consensual pairing.
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