This is just my bent, I don't find a santa figure particularly sexy. So, a young girl going down on Santa, of Santa screwing someone just doesn't turn me on. This Santa figure doesn't seem particularly warm and fuzzy. I think your choice of topic dragged this story down from what it could have been.
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Anonymous12/06/08
Yep, you DID ask for feedback ....
Don't really care about Santa, though I find it odd that this happened in a mall, with nobody around? ... Sex was good, but you left me with no idea where she was coming from, or why she was doing this ... left it kind of mechanical, like some kind of recipe with the basic/necessary erotica points covered to qualify as literotica, but kind of cold for anybody trying to imagine that this could actally have happened ...
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This is just my bent, I don't find a santa figure particularly sexy. So, a young girl going down on Santa, of Santa screwing someone just doesn't turn me on. This Santa figure doesn't seem particularly warm and fuzzy. I think your choice of topic dragged this story down from what it could have been.
Yep, you DID ask for feedback ....
Don't really care about Santa, though I find it odd that this happened in a mall, with nobody around? ... Sex was good, but you left me with no idea where she was coming from, or why she was doing this ... left it kind of mechanical, like some kind of recipe with the basic/necessary erotica points covered to qualify as literotica, but kind of cold for anybody trying to imagine that this could actally have happened ...
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