All Comments on 'Not So Silent Night'

by secretagent229

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very nice

Loved it. I thought adding Daryk to Jake, wow, I'm so turned on right now. Good job.. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
mmmmm, I need more!

I gave it a 4 instead of a 5 because it was waaaaaayyyyy too short!! I love the sandwich threesome but someone as gay as Daryk just can't get away with not getting fucked as hard -or harder- than any chick :) besides, don't you think that he might want to worship that throbing fuckstick! I would put him on all 4's and make him eat a hot creampie while getting the fuck of his life! the pseudolesbian undertone with the new found bisexuality of jake would have been delicious! give us more of the three baristas :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
My favorite fantasy!!!

I have never worked in a coffee shop but if this were to ever offer I would definitely sign on. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Typing with one hand...

Never has a threesome like that turned me on so much. So many times working as a barista in small town cafes, I have wished for a fantasy like that to come true. Thank you for making this into a Christmas story too, another fantasy of mine. Best story I've read so far that has made me want to orgasm :)

secretagent229secretagent229over 15 years agoAuthor
thanks

aww thanks for the comments! this was my first try, and i didn't really realize it probably should have been longer. it is based in part from reality when i worked at a coffee shop, and a dream i had about two coworkers ;-) it never actually happened alas, but i decided to mix dream and reality to make it interesting! thanks again for the comments i really appreciate the feedback. i'll try to write more later!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Next chapter

Great scenario but you didn't write the next bit - Jake fucking Daryk. I'm sure that's where these guys are going. Give it a try.

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