All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 21'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sorry about the rating

I accidentally rated your story a 1 when I meant a 5.

Mojo648Mojo648over 5 years ago
Review.

To many single page storyline that are to quickly into sex, wont be long b4 H.J needs an aids or std test,

Make less chapters but make them longer, not practically straight into sex, make them more of abelievable storyline, please.

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