I've read both installments of this, and although I like it and the characters, I find it confusing. Where is this school? Is it a high school or university? Did Judas kill Elena's parents? Was Alphonse there when she discovered it? Sorry if I'm missing the obvious, but I'm just foundering here. Maybe I need more sleep...
...left yourself a lot of questions to answer. I hope to see the answers in the coming chapters that will be necessary to fill in all of the blanks. -M
I love it, but it reads more like a manga might...I'm thinking if you either drew illustrations or found someone willing to do it for you, it would be wonderful! (PS, loved the groundhog thing!) =D
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Anonymous12/10/11
Did any of this make any sense to anyone other than the author?
Did any of this make any sense to anyone other than the author? I was assuming that it does make sense to the author, but now I'm having doubts about it.
English
Good but confusing
I've read both installments of this, and although I like it and the characters, I find it confusing. Where is this school? Is it a high school or university? Did Judas kill Elena's parents? Was Alphonse there when she discovered it? Sorry if I'm missing the obvious, but I'm just foundering here. Maybe I need more sleep...
Definitely...
...left yourself a lot of questions to answer. I hope to see the answers in the coming chapters that will be necessary to fill in all of the blanks. -M
Good!
I love it, but it reads more like a manga might...I'm thinking if you either drew illustrations or found someone willing to do it for you, it would be wonderful! (PS, loved the groundhog thing!) =D
Did any of this make any sense to anyone other than the author?
Did any of this make any sense to anyone other than the author? I was assuming that it does make sense to the author, but now I'm having doubts about it.
-- srgeek --
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