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A bit rushed
I've read the previous installments in this series, and I like them, but this seems to be the weakest. The characters aren't developed as well, and the action seemed pretty rushed. However, it looks like more is coming on this, and I do want to find out what happens, so please keep writing!
I agree with the poster below...
it did seem a bit rushed but I gave you a 100 anyway because I have followed this series since you put it out and I love it. I love all the characters too. With this particular bunch of guys....they are all such great boys and remind me of some friends I had when I was younger. These guys though seem to all have gone through one traumatic thing or another. It's sad but its real....like real life issues. Looking forward to the next part!!!
A good story
But it needs some touching up in some places keep up the good work Devon is learning fast what it means to be in a realtionship .
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