Very distracting. I read it twice and was enthralled both times. Such good writing and so well constructed. Keep it up. (you kept mine up)
Sorry 5 stars is all they allow. I think 10 is more appropriate
really like the way it ended without sending the videos to the husband. Good choice!!
I'd like to publish this story. If you are interested, please visit onehandedreads.com for more details. Thanks!
Absolutely love this as well as my virgin sister(huge fan of incest obviously).Your stories present an interesting and very entertaining mix of realism, eroticism, and comedy that i just cant get enough of. You are an excellent writer and i hope you never cease to express your talent in stories such as these. PS the sheer sexual purity of your stories combined with the fact that i dont masturbate to literature has ruined masturbation for me(but kinda in a good way)
I don't give 5 stars ratings very often (hardly ever) but this was a realistic story (in spite of it's strangeness) and I liked the slow buildup to the inevitable outcome and the wonderful sexiness of the ending so much - a shame there's not a higher rating!!
I loved this story. It had me hooked from the first page, all the way to the last. Well written and believable.
i really enjoyed your story. it had a good build up and was written very well. my wife and i enjoyed it. you deserve the five stars we gave you :)
The best story i have read on Literotica and there are some other great stories here but i just love how you moved the story along and the way you developed the relationship between sister and brother.. This story is gets me really worked up! Please write some more!
The best story I have read here so far!
A cliff hanger, is not the end, just more to follow. I was going to give you a 5 not a 4.
I really hate cliff hangers. You left your story to end at the the start, of long lasting love afare. What if Mark gets killed. The sister stills needs more love and hot sex from her brother.
Thank about it, you could make the story last a lot longer. Only if you get rid of the
Cliff Hanger at the end of your story.
I cannot believe how amazing this story is. The build up was very well written, especially the kid's internal thoughts, they had me smiling quite a few times. The ending was one of the best I have ever read, you let us know what was going to happen, while not telling us too much. Obviously a sequel would be nice, but the story is perfect the way it is.
Amazing job. The cliff hanger ending was my favorite part. I thought there was going to be some bull shit ending that was rushed and didn't make since, but you pulled this off beautifully from top to bottom.
This is such a clever plot, it is a real pleasure to read as it gradually builds the excitement and anticipation of the reader, just as that of the young male protagonist.
You're a great story teller.
Thanks for such a wonderful job!
This story has such an incredible slow buildup and keeps climbing up and up with characters that are rather believable and a lot of fun. The plot is intricate and extremely clever. It's one of my all time favorite stories.
Thanks so much!
absoulty one of the best i have read. woooow' more please.
This story is truly a great love story between a boy and his sister , it deserves a second chapter (at least) , with the Geek and his Sister becoming a family .
Continue the story! She could teach him to fuck her ass?
I'll be back later to look further!
My pussy is soaked and I need more.
So amazingly HOTTTT ... loved it
This is in many ways the perfect erotic short story with a very clever and possibly realistic plot which is superbly constructed. It gradually builds and builds to soar higher and higher, always promising more and then delivering on it. There is sufficient detail and no rush which makes for a far better story than most others. Great Job!
Thanks so much for writing it.
Hope you come back with some more great stuff.
Absolutely fucking amazing, please please do not stop here. The best I have ever read 10 stars at least. my girl and I fucked and sucked each other into next week over and over, she can barely stop creaming, and I have a lob most of the time when not fully hard, and I have nearly worn my tongue out. More lots more please and soon.
I have read a lot of stories on here and that was one of the best... Extraordinarily well written... perfect progression... absolutely loved it...
This was a great story. Builds nicely and finishes wonderfully.
Certainly one of my all time favorites.
What a great plot line. I have read and re-read this and love it even more each time, even though some of the surprise elements is gone.
Ingenious and beautifully written.
Great story line and delivery! This will be definitely be deposited into my spank bank! Keep up the great work!
Best ever story on Literotica!
BUT WHAT HAPPENS, WHEN THE OLD MAN GET HOME FROM THE WAR. BYE BYE RONNIE. PLEASE TAKE US TOO ANOTHER CHAPTER, AND SOME HOW DON'T LET THE KID GET LEFT OUT. A FAN FOREVER MORE MORE MORE
I read this at work and now I'm rock hard and can't leave to catch my bus.
That was amazingly awesome wow what a story. Thank you and please keep up the phonominal work bravo.
Mate, this is almost too hot!!
I'm pretty sure it's a true story...
Very good story. I did find some grammar issues, but whatever! :D all in all, it was a good story and must be continued.
Just incredible... What a beautifully erotic story...loved it! Look forward to more stories of yours!
You could write more to this story. After all your the writer, I am merely the reader of an awesome story !! Thank you for shareing it with us.
One of the best stories I've read on this site! Great job! Had me glued on every word.
as many have said "5" is not good enough for this this story. it kept me reading it until the last words. I would like to se it continued in some way- perhaps a threesome?, oor her husbands untimely passing? Please keep writing more great story!
Absolutely brilliant ! keep it going - I need to come again !!!
The best story ever!
...a sequel! i want to know what happens in "sex school"!! and what happens with Mark!
This has not only the best plot, but close to the best writing, and delivers the goods in every possible way.
I love several things about this story...
1). It's incredibly well written. That is paramount to my enjoyment of the story.
2). The buildup and fruition of the sex between brother and sister was titillating, and sweet.
3). I appreciated Ronnie's being honest with his sister about the possible misuse of the videos. Many writers wouldn't have thought to include his concern for his sister.
4). Last, but not least, I can see this scenario being realistic. I'm not fond of other writers who put siblings together for a lifetime, having children together, and damn the consequences.
Your story was erotic, yet sweet, realistic, and even ethical, if not taboo. This was a great read. I gave you five stars.
At 57 I am a very difficult man to satisfy but your story makes my precum flow freely.
This was an extremely well written piece. The build up was perfect. I loved the humorous bits through out. I think it was human and within the realm of possibility which added to it's realism and eroticism. This is the first piece of yours I have read and will be sure to read everything you write.
I hate you SO FUCKING MUCH for not continuing this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What's wrong with you! It was amazing and the best of all I've read. PLEASE continue this story!!!
loved the story, the build up worked well even though one knew what was coming, I would have so liked to do this with my sister when her husband was away on the North Sea oil rig.
a superb story mixed with humor and erotism had to hold back till page 6 lol
this is very fucking epic keep doing what you do
This definitely isn't until Mark gets home. She'll still fuck a lot, and fuck Mark as an extra!
Good job though, loved the story's humor & erotiscm mixed up! 5/5!
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