something to go wrong. Police, vice squad, pimps, abduction, drive bys, or just other pros not wanting to share their turf. Then again stupid people do stupid things.
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Anonymous12/09/08
Weak
Saw the ending coming from the very beginning.
And to whomever wrote this: "Very stupid actions, to many possibilities for something to go wrong. Police, vice squad, pimps, abduction, drive bys, or just other pros not wanting to share their turf. Then again stupid people do stupid things."
You're an idiot.
Please continue writing all thought you might want to proof read first. (I know that sounds strange coming from me doesn't it?)
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Anonymous12/09/08
Disregard The Negative
The people who are talking bad about your story are probably not married and might not even have a girlfriend. Couples need to have fun like this from time to time. It's what keeps the marriage fresh. Nice story and very cool fantasy!
Foreshadowed by her 'thought bubble' that she had never deep-throated any guy in her life (to date!). Also by the John-Hubby agreeing to an 'area-exorbitant' fee for full-depth! TLW.
(incidentally, it is awkward for street working girls to ply their trade on streets where parking is allowed. Cruising-Johns usually pull over to the curve for negotiations to commence, not ladies walking to parked cars to solicit!).
4*
English
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Sweet
Very stupid actions, to many possibilities for
something to go wrong. Police, vice squad, pimps, abduction, drive bys, or just other pros not wanting to share their turf. Then again stupid people do stupid things.
Weak
Saw the ending coming from the very beginning.
And to whomever wrote this: "Very stupid actions, to many possibilities for something to go wrong. Police, vice squad, pimps, abduction, drive bys, or just other pros not wanting to share their turf. Then again stupid people do stupid things."
You're an idiot.
Loved it
Predictable. But a very nice read.
very nice. Short but sweet.
Please continue writing all thought you might want to proof read first. (I know that sounds strange coming from me doesn't it?)
Disregard The Negative
The people who are talking bad about your story are probably not married and might not even have a girlfriend. Couples need to have fun like this from time to time. It's what keeps the marriage fresh. Nice story and very cool fantasy!
Nice story
I liked the twist at the end.
Quick and cute
Foreshadowed by her 'thought bubble' that she had never deep-throated any guy in her life (to date!). Also by the John-Hubby agreeing to an 'area-exorbitant' fee for full-depth! TLW.
(incidentally, it is awkward for street working girls to ply their trade on streets where parking is allowed. Cruising-Johns usually pull over to the curve for negotiations to commence, not ladies walking to parked cars to solicit!).
4*
Please more with Jill in her boots
I would like a part 2.
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