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by SteelAndSilk

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
A poem to make you curse

This poem is better than anything Keats ever wrote. But that's about it.

SteelAndSilkSteelAndSilkalmost 13 years agoAuthor
I know...

Yeah, it sucks. It was kinda my first (and last) foray into the realm of poetry, and I was trying to put words to an experience I had, but, like a lot of writers here, my stories/articles are pretty well received, and my poetry sucks balls. I really wish I could delete it, lol, but it is what it is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
If by dull rhymes our English must be chain'd...

The poetry of earth is never dead:

When all the girls are faint with the hot sun,

And hide 'neath some cooling shade, a voice will run

From hedge to town about the new-shaved maid.

Keats eh! Keep writing S&S.

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