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by Anonymous

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by 12/07/08

Nicely done, Ogg!

You've chosen a really tough format but, as usual, handled it impeccably and with a great deal of wry humor mixed in with the sex. I particularly enjoyed, "Perhaps that’s why she has tied me to her legs." Good luck in the contest!

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by tickledkitty12/07/08

I wouldn't have thought...

I'd enjoy something like this, but I did. I think these little snippets give a pretty clear picture of who these characters are, which surprises me, given the brevity. Skillfully done, King Og. Good luck in the contest.

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by Katiecat12/07/08

pleasant surprise!

Ogg...this was such a surprise. Not my typical category, and you definitely went for a challenging format. But your little vignettes were concise, visual, and often hilarious. They were like some kind of psychedelic fetish haiku -- well done!

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by sack12/07/08

a riot.....

I particularly liked the one about the cracker.....you are just too funny.

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by PrincessErin12/07/08

Loved it

Very sexy and funny at the same time.

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by Anonymous12/09/08

love the vignettes

but hate sprouts :)

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by MarshAlien12/09/08

Bag Pudding?

There's English, and then there's English. Very well done, sir. The skill you put into choosing individual words is never more evident. Congrats.

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by PositiveThinker12/22/08

Amazing.

Amazing. You are very talented. I loved the idea. Great.

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by Anonymous09/12/11

sounds good

that has given me some good ideas what to do at christmas for some naughty fun.

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