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by normal jean06/24/09

I don't understand why

there are no comments on your work. It;s a shame and a loss to everyone who enjoys poetry.

This is another excellent piece but you do not need the ellipses. A period would suffice and in the case of the second strophe, it weakens it. The second strophe is my favorite but all of them are strong. You have such a talent, I loved your site and am glad to see that your poetry and art is not languishing here, waiting for someone to accidentally discover it.

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by tazz31701/19/12

EVEN THOUGH WE TRY TO DO

our lithesome figures err in their favor. TK U MLJ LV NV

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