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WOW!!!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's refreshing to read a story that's well written,knowledgeable,erotic ,yet not obscene. Kitten, I've always enjoyed your writing,but this is the first time to vote or comment......Rob
Yes
I enjoyed your story very much. It is so refreshing to read erotica with plot. Thanks for a great read!
Nice Storytelling
It is always so refreshing to see a story where the sex flows out of the story, as opposed to the words just being there to serve up some sex. Very enjoyable. Now, what else is buried 4000 feet down?
Touch o' magic
Breaking my pattern of rarely/never commenting any more when I'm trying to make it through all the contest submissions, but I loved the touch o' magic in this one.
I really
really liked this! Good luck, Selena!
The Element Lovium
Loved your chemistry, Selena! The sex was hot too! Good luck in the contest!
Nicely Done!
A bit magical with something elemental thrown in. Very well done Selena!
Loved it!
A wonderful story, SK! Good luck!
simply stunning....
great combination of unusual topic, sex, and professional storytelling. Good luck!
Once again, you...
have proven why you ARE THE MASTER!!! Wonderful story, very unusual situation, well written, as always!
Thanks for sharing!
Have a great day,
~Sky~
Surprising depth
Wow. I was predisposed to think that this would be just another Screwing with Santa story. Wrong-O! I'm just totally blown away! Thank you. I'll be reading your other work.. Sorry that this did not fit the contest's theme better. If not for that, you'd be a winner sure!
Unconventional
I never expected to find something of this nature in a website like this. The plot was too intricate but it's unconventionality made it work. Well done! Although, I AM curious to what they have found although fictional.
i am humbled
what more can i say?
Hmmmmm
I don't really know what to say here. The story was lovely, and very well written, but I guess I just have a problemwith the science. Mary, if she's a scientist, seems like she should be much more analytical, and not so quick to jump to a conclusion. I'm not saying she was wrong, just that I wanted more convincing she was right. A little more elaboration on the source of her sureness would have been nice.
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