Apart from a cheating slut of course. It would be one thing if your husband knew what was going on and like a good wimp cuck he liked being tied up and humiliated. But he doesn't know he's been cucked does he? It just goes to show how much respect you hsve for your husband doesn't it?
Consensual play is one thing, but I find this act despicable. Technically written well, but there is no back story or inner dialogue to explain the situation and why she is doing this. Pregnancy? Act out a fantasy BETWEEN the two of them? Or is she just a slut?
So what's he going to think once he catches her and plunges into her creampie snatch? Placed in erotic coupling, I didn't anticipate blatant cheating and cuckolding for this story.
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Anonymous12/11/08
Very Sexy!
I liked the story a lot. You obviously put much thought and effort into it. All in all, it's a success.
This STORY was written very well. Usually I read the stories on this WONDERFUL site make My judgements to myself on weither I like them or not.
That being said I was Shocked When I read some of the Negative Feedback to this story.. Calling a fellow Member of this site a Slut?? A whore? Are you kidding? It's a story. If you read it and did not like the story,It is one thing hell I think we all have different taste. To call someone a name because you didn't Like the content is not only shameful it's wrong.
Once again Love the story and I look foreward to future stories From this Author.
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Anonymous02/27/09
Good but low
Love the wordings and the level of excitement is quite well conveyed. But the fact that the female character cheated on her husband right in front of him is just low. I also think what would happen when they reach the bedroom? Whose cum is that?! To be honest any guys that get horny after listening to erotic music need to grow up, a little aroused and in the mood is probably more like it. Other than the bad storyline you've done pretty good.
English
Nice!
I love your story! Keep writting!
What sort of wife are you?
Apart from a cheating slut of course. It would be one thing if your husband knew what was going on and like a good wimp cuck he liked being tied up and humiliated. But he doesn't know he's been cucked does he? It just goes to show how much respect you hsve for your husband doesn't it?
Disturbing
Consensual play is one thing, but I find this act despicable. Technically written well, but there is no back story or inner dialogue to explain the situation and why she is doing this. Pregnancy? Act out a fantasy BETWEEN the two of them? Or is she just a slut?
So what's he going to think once he catches her and plunges into her creampie snatch? Placed in erotic coupling, I didn't anticipate blatant cheating and cuckolding for this story.
Very Sexy!
I liked the story a lot. You obviously put much thought and effort into it. All in all, it's a success.
Ignore the haters.
Loved The STORY
This STORY was written very well. Usually I read the stories on this WONDERFUL site make My judgements to myself on weither I like them or not.
That being said I was Shocked When I read some of the Negative Feedback to this story.. Calling a fellow Member of this site a Slut?? A whore? Are you kidding? It's a story. If you read it and did not like the story,It is one thing hell I think we all have different taste. To call someone a name because you didn't Like the content is not only shameful it's wrong.
Once again Love the story and I look foreward to future stories From this Author.
Good but low
Love the wordings and the level of excitement is quite well conveyed. But the fact that the female character cheated on her husband right in front of him is just low. I also think what would happen when they reach the bedroom? Whose cum is that?! To be honest any guys that get horny after listening to erotic music need to grow up, a little aroused and in the mood is probably more like it. Other than the bad storyline you've done pretty good.
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