One of the best short erotic stories I have read in Literotica. This is something men fantasize about regularly - beautiful sexy stranger in confined quarters coming on to you.
Absolutely solid story. You had great description and pulled off a fantasy that can be so straight-forward and ordinary. "She was technicolor and everyone else sepia." Fancy words, but it was simple and brilliant description. You had a nice, slow pace, good build-up and I could picture every moment.
Great work.
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Anonymous06/06/09
Manners maketh man
I was always taught that a gentleman always gives up his seat to a lady in a public convenience.
English
Absolutely Erotic - first class
One of the best short erotic stories I have read in Literotica. This is something men fantasize about regularly - beautiful sexy stranger in confined quarters coming on to you.
Wonderful!
Absolutely solid story. You had great description and pulled off a fantasy that can be so straight-forward and ordinary. "She was technicolor and everyone else sepia." Fancy words, but it was simple and brilliant description. You had a nice, slow pace, good build-up and I could picture every moment.
Great work.
Manners maketh man
I was always taught that a gentleman always gives up his seat to a lady in a public convenience.
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