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A Private Show in a Public Place

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by bogg9901/10/09

Absolutely Erotic - first class

One of the best short erotic stories I have read in Literotica. This is something men fantasize about regularly - beautiful sexy stranger in confined quarters coming on to you.

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by davion230801/11/09

Wonderful!

Absolutely solid story. You had great description and pulled off a fantasy that can be so straight-forward and ordinary. "She was technicolor and everyone else sepia." Fancy words, but it was simple and brilliant description. You had a nice, slow pace, good build-up and I could picture every moment.

Great work.

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by Anonymous06/06/09

Manners maketh man

I was always taught that a gentleman always gives up his seat to a lady in a public convenience.

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