All Comments on 'Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 02'

This is extremely well written and developped. I do find it strange that there are no commentaries. What occurs to me is that many people only comment in order to criticize the work and rarely praise it. Thanks for this labor of love Kezza.

Bruce 22

with interesting people living complicated lives.

thanks

we stop along the way to smell

grass is not good for my allergies.