This is extremely well written and developped. I do find it strange that there are no commentaries. What occurs to me is that many people only comment in order to criticize the work and rarely praise it. Thanks for this labor of love Kezza. Bruce 22
with interesting people living complicated lives. thanks
we stop along the way to smell grass is not good for my allergies.
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This is extremely well written and developped. I do find it strange that there are no commentaries. What occurs to me is that many people only comment in order to criticize the work and rarely praise it. Thanks for this labor of love Kezza.
Bruce 22
Another fine story
with interesting people living complicated lives.
thanks
for some of us it is the roses
we stop along the way to smell
grass is not good for my allergies.
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