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Nicely done as usual, but...
...the twist of the mysterious stranger actually turning out to be a lover has been done before. I should know, I've written one along those lines too . Best, Ken
So What?
What theme hasn't been written before, Ken? You won a contest here last year with a sob theme that had already been beaten to death for years. lol.
The skill is in making standard themes ever fresh and interesting. This one works for me.
Nicely written
Nicely written. You are a very talented writer. I'm a long time reader and have been going down the list of the most popular writers to build up the courage to submit my first story. Thank you.
Happy Holidays.
I have to agree...
with 4glory6. With the thousands of stories on this site, everything has been done before. This one succeeded in keeping the twist a surprise until the very end.
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