All Comments on 'Untitled for Now'

Since I don't know which direction this story is going - only a 75 - but it is good enough to want to see more.

it intrigued me enough to rate it a 100 and I'll definitely be looking out for the next part!

Okay, I got the bit about this submission being a trial run of some sort. But if this is the opening, it provides little clue as to where the storyline can be expected to go. Sorry, but it seemed more a waste of time than anything else.

-- KK in Texas

camaraderie between them, very believable. The mystery of Andre is intriguing.